wise_mommy

Délicatesse Final Pages | 11-16

Published: August 5th 2021, 11:49:05 pm

Hey everyone! Thank you for your feedback on the tones last time - I agree it's probably a patreon-only issue, and if anyone would like me to start uploading .pdfs of each update for easier reading, lmk! 

I thought I'd be able to get more done these past two weeks, but moving took up all of my time. I'm back on schedule for now, though, and I'll have at least 5 pages up next week. We're just barely over halfway through the story at this point! 

The dialogue in these pages changed the most significantly from the script. I wanted to make it clear that Primrose isn't being treated worse now than he was when he presented in a more masculine way. This is a story is in part about giving in to pressures to be more "feminine", and while you're treated better and as more desirable for it, it can be an incredibly alienating experience for a transmasculine person (tho Prim does not know this about himself at this point). Changing your presentation comes with finding new ways for people to admonish you - it's getting used to a different set of rules than the ones you're used to. 

I may still poke around at dialogue on these pages, and pages before. I'm going to give myself a week after pages are finished to go back and fix things I don't like before I upload the final .pdf publicly. Thank you for reading so far!