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Chapter 8 / Page 20 breakdowns

Published: November 30th 2023, 2:17:10 am

This scene is so WORDY! We tried to make the scene imagery fun despite all the information/history we were trying to convey. Conversations shouldn't be a slog to draw or read!

One thing I failed to mention on page 19 at the beginning of this chapter - as Percy moves through this chapter and interacts with different people in different circumstances, she changes her look subtly. As soon as she meets up with Hyewon, she puts on this flannel and puts her hair up to push her and Hyewon further apart in presentation. Hyewon gets to be the queen of femme, no one may stand above her.

We try to make Hyweon increasingly angelic in this scene!!! I said before, she exists in a different genre of story so she can summon her own fairytale bokeh at emotional peaks. If you pay attention, it continues throughout the rest of her scenes!