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Monthly Story "Length" - Poll #1 The Naruto story was decently long (92ish pages,) and I felt its pacing was pretty good for the most part when I wasn't playing around with the "fight" scene. However, I want to know what you guys think/prefer for the next monthly story as far as page length goes. You all probably know by now that I'm a big story/setup guy, so a "decent-pace" for me is probably entirely different than your "decent-pace." Do you guys prefer a quick 1-2 punch setup right into the sex scenes (30 page one-shot doujinshi style?) Maybe a long CG story around 200ish pages? 400? I've seen longer... and when should the main character start "getting busy" with the other chars? ASAP? halfway-in? Throughout? I usually build into it like with Gyaru, but I think that the Delivery story worked pretty well having those scenes throughout the whole thing. I like to throw plenty of fanservice out there throughout the story regardless. I understand though if people aren't too satisfied with a chapters' big payoff being a kiss scene instead of some hardcore stuff. I like the softcore fanservice like dress-up and kisses/hugging; but I find myself getting impatient too sometimes. There's a reason I added that dream sequence sex scene to the Ash story. This poll is mainly for the monthly stories which may update slower, but feel free to let me know your thoughts on the pacing in general. If you don't feel too stongly about the pacing of the lewd scenes, then the basic answers that list the page counts are the options you want.

Published: November 22nd 2023, 9:50:07 pm

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Monthly Story "Length" - Poll #1 The Naruto story was decently long (92ish pages,) and I felt its pacing was pretty good for the most part when I wasn't playing around with the "fight" scene. However, I want to know what you guys think/prefer for the next monthly story as far as page length goes. You all probably know by now that I'm a big story/setup guy, so a "decent-pace" for me is probably entirely different than your "decent-pace." Do you guys prefer a quick 1-2 punch setup right into the sex scenes (30 page one-shot doujinshi style?) Maybe a long CG story around 200ish pages? 400? I've seen longer... and when should the main character start "getting busy" with the other chars? ASAP? halfway-in? Throughout? I usually build into it like with Gyaru, but I think that the Delivery story worked pretty well having those scenes throughout the whole thing. I like to throw plenty of fanservice out there throughout the story regardless. I understand though if people aren't too satisfied with a chapters' big payoff being a kiss scene instead of some hardcore stuff. I like the softcore fanservice like dress-up and kisses/hugging; but I find myself getting impatient too sometimes. There's a reason I added that dream sequence sex scene to the Ash story. This poll is mainly for the monthly stories which may update slower, but feel free to let me know your thoughts on the pacing in general. If you don't feel too stongly about the pacing of the lewd scenes, then the basic answers that list the page counts are the options you want.

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Tsunade's Special Training Length/Direction Poll Continued (This is Option #2 in the poll. Sorry for the confusion) 3. A Little Longer, but skip into Shippuden right away. Same as #2, but I skip right to shippuden and save all the story for then instead of setting up more with pre-shippuden characters. This means the same story but with a girlier Naruto earlier (farther along with bigger breasts most likely.) It opens up some different avenues but skips out on anything else I might have wanted to set up in pre-shippuden. (Not a huge deal though. I'd work around it) 4. Even Longer- If you guys really like this story, I can make it even longer. I'm talking like, 13 chapters plus probably. I can show Jiraiya coming back, Sasuke coming back, maybe even the Akatsuki entering the village and trying to capture girl naruto- and it wouldn't just be story-focused no, no... You can guarantee that if Naruto is running into more characters than more kinky stuff is going to happen for sure. There would still be a primary focus on his training and him becoming a lady/noblewoman/daughter etc, but I could play around a lot with the events of Naruto if we're progressing this alternate timeline rather than just ending it mid-shippuden or not focusing on the events of the show in general. Naruto could "entertain" guests of the leaf, be ravaged by kidnappers, be saved by a potential love interest, and maybe even charm Sasuke back into Konoha? All sorts of things could happen but the main thing is, rather than having sexual training advance into Naruto possibly hooking up with a man and the story ending in a big sex scene, I could have lady Naruto hook up with a bunch of different guys in various scenarios. Pros: Lots of 18+ scenes with a bunch of different guys, more story/character focus, more "drama." Cons: More setup, and a longer story means it'll take longer for me to start another new story. Personally, I don't prefer this option as I wanted this story to be more focused, but it's up to you.

Tsunade's Special Training Length/Direction Poll Continued (This is Option #2 in the poll. Sorry for the confusion) 3. A Little Longer, but skip into Shippuden right away. Same as #2, but I skip right to shippuden and save all the story for then instead of setting up more with pre-shippuden characters. This means the same story but with a girlier Naruto earlier (farther along with bigger breasts most likely.) It opens up some different avenues but skips out on anything else I might have wanted to set up in pre-shippuden. (Not a huge deal though. I'd work around it) 4. Even Longer- If you guys really like this story, I can make it even longer. I'm talking like, 13 chapters plus probably. I can show Jiraiya coming back, Sasuke coming back, maybe even the Akatsuki entering the village and trying to capture girl naruto- and it wouldn't just be story-focused no, no... You can guarantee that if Naruto is running into more characters than more kinky stuff is going to happen for sure. There would still be a primary focus on his training and him becoming a lady/noblewoman/daughter etc, but I could play around a lot with the events of Naruto if we're progressing this alternate timeline rather than just ending it mid-shippuden or not focusing on the events of the show in general. Naruto could "entertain" guests of the leaf, be ravaged by kidnappers, be saved by a potential love interest, and maybe even charm Sasuke back into Konoha? All sorts of things could happen but the main thing is, rather than having sexual training advance into Naruto possibly hooking up with a man and the story ending in a big sex scene, I could have lady Naruto hook up with a bunch of different guys in various scenarios. Pros: Lots of 18+ scenes with a bunch of different guys, more story/character focus, more "drama." Cons: More setup, and a longer story means it'll take longer for me to start another new story. Personally, I don't prefer this option as I wanted this story to be more focused, but it's up to you.

Short or long stories?

Short or long stories?

Monthly Story Ideas - Poll #2 As I wrap up Gyaru 11, I wanted to hear your thoughts on some settings/characters/themes for the monthly story. I liked doing the Naruto stuff a lot and I'm definitely down to do more licensed parody content in the future. I also have plenty of scenarios in mind for OCs and some sequel ideas too. If you have an idea you want to share or a series you want to see that isn't listed, feel free to post about it in a comment and if it gets a decent amount of likes (or I take a liking to it ofc) I might make a new poll with that idea in it or maybe just write it down for the next one of these polls. Here are some Ideas I've had: Man forced into becoming a prison b*tch after a failed disguise attempt. Maybe he would start in the woman's prison and be forced into crossdressing/sex stuff over there first before eventually getting found out and put in the guys prison. I wouldn't focus too much on race stuff (I feel like nearly every prison TG story does...) but there would be some BBCs for sure. I have a lot of ideas for this one and havent settled on too many specifics, but it has a lot of potential I think. Failure of a Brother: Forced into Becoming a Crossplay Slave 2 (The Koakuma one) This sequel would show the main character's parents coming back from Europe months after the events of the first story. With a new pair of breasts and a radical change in appearance, Katou's parents completely fail to recognize the sissy brother. Katou (now Katie/Koakuma) shamefully hides his identity from his parents while masquerading as his brothers hot girlfriend. Lots of hidden sex, shame, and debauchery as the dominant step-brother continues to groom his wife-to-be. The characters would look noticeably older in this sequel though compared to the last one.

Monthly Story Ideas - Poll #2 As I wrap up Gyaru 11, I wanted to hear your thoughts on some settings/characters/themes for the monthly story. I liked doing the Naruto stuff a lot and I'm definitely down to do more licensed parody content in the future. I also have plenty of scenarios in mind for OCs and some sequel ideas too. If you have an idea you want to share or a series you want to see that isn't listed, feel free to post about it in a comment and if it gets a decent amount of likes (or I take a liking to it ofc) I might make a new poll with that idea in it or maybe just write it down for the next one of these polls. Here are some Ideas I've had: Man forced into becoming a prison b*tch after a failed disguise attempt. Maybe he would start in the woman's prison and be forced into crossdressing/sex stuff over there first before eventually getting found out and put in the guys prison. I wouldn't focus too much on race stuff (I feel like nearly every prison TG story does...) but there would be some BBCs for sure. I have a lot of ideas for this one and havent settled on too many specifics, but it has a lot of potential I think. Failure of a Brother: Forced into Becoming a Crossplay Slave 2 (The Koakuma one) This sequel would show the main character's parents coming back from Europe months after the events of the first story. With a new pair of breasts and a radical change in appearance, Katou's parents completely fail to recognize the sissy brother. Katou (now Katie/Koakuma) shamefully hides his identity from his parents while masquerading as his brothers hot girlfriend. Lots of hidden sex, shame, and debauchery as the dominant step-brother continues to groom his wife-to-be. The characters would look noticeably older in this sequel though compared to the last one.

Tsunade's Special Training Length/Direction Poll Here's the options: 1. The Orginal Plan- We jump right into Shippuden and have Naruto continue his lady training. He'd interact with Sakura and Ino but probably not any other Genins until love interests come up later on. I'd try and wrap it up by chapter 6 and I'd rely on hypnotism to keep the plot moving quickly instead of focusing on social aspects and other characters besides his teachers. Pros: Big boobs sooner, 18+ stuff sooner. Cons: Heavy reliance on hypno, less focus on Naruto as a character. There would still be plenty of scenes of Naruto freaking out or breaking free of his programming every now and again as things get intense. 2. A Little Longer- (This is #3 in the Poll. Sorry for the confusion) I show more characters reacting to the "new" Naruto, focusing on Naruto's character a bit more as Naruto begins to realize that he doesn't have a place among the other boys. I'd make time to showcase Naruto's embarrassment and fears, maybe having dream sequences of him turning into his "mother;" but also I could humanize his feminization a bit more by showing some more conflict he has with Tsunade rather than waving away all of the unrealism with Genjutsu/Hypnosis. It would also just be a longer story that would include all the intense feminization training we're going to see in the short version while making room for some extra stuff like dream sequences, girly parties/hangouts, and more emphasis and Naruto and Tsunade's relationship. Pros: More character-driven plots, more shame/humiliation, more on the everyday life of girl Naruto. Cons: A longer wait for 18+ stuff, a longer story (8-9 chapters probably.) There would be less of a focus on Mind Break with this one, but Naruto will still be molded into Tsunade's perfect daughter.

Tsunade's Special Training Length/Direction Poll Here's the options: 1. The Orginal Plan- We jump right into Shippuden and have Naruto continue his lady training. He'd interact with Sakura and Ino but probably not any other Genins until love interests come up later on. I'd try and wrap it up by chapter 6 and I'd rely on hypnotism to keep the plot moving quickly instead of focusing on social aspects and other characters besides his teachers. Pros: Big boobs sooner, 18+ stuff sooner. Cons: Heavy reliance on hypno, less focus on Naruto as a character. There would still be plenty of scenes of Naruto freaking out or breaking free of his programming every now and again as things get intense. 2. A Little Longer- (This is #3 in the Poll. Sorry for the confusion) I show more characters reacting to the "new" Naruto, focusing on Naruto's character a bit more as Naruto begins to realize that he doesn't have a place among the other boys. I'd make time to showcase Naruto's embarrassment and fears, maybe having dream sequences of him turning into his "mother;" but also I could humanize his feminization a bit more by showing some more conflict he has with Tsunade rather than waving away all of the unrealism with Genjutsu/Hypnosis. It would also just be a longer story that would include all the intense feminization training we're going to see in the short version while making room for some extra stuff like dream sequences, girly parties/hangouts, and more emphasis and Naruto and Tsunade's relationship. Pros: More character-driven plots, more shame/humiliation, more on the everyday life of girl Naruto. Cons: A longer wait for 18+ stuff, a longer story (8-9 chapters probably.) There would be less of a focus on Mind Break with this one, but Naruto will still be molded into Tsunade's perfect daughter.